Hi my Name is Le'shar and I go to Pt England School I live in New Zealand Glen Innes. I have 2 best friends, their names are Phoenix and Julia. Both of them are 12 years old. We have been best friends for 2 years. My culture is Maori and
I am 12 years old. I love to play games with my friends and my family sometimes I love to go out
with my nana too.
Hi Le'shar - These are some well thought out ideas. I really like your one about warm houses and having enough food - Totally agree. Which topic would you choose to write more about for your persuasive writing?
Kia Ora Le'shar - These are some well thought out ideas. I really like your one about warm houses and having enough food. What would you change mostly and what is your favourite thing about your task and next time can you write more in your task description?
Hi Le'shar - These are some well thought out ideas. I really like your one about warm houses and having enough food - Totally agree. Which topic would you choose to write more about for your persuasive writing?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Le'shar - These are some well thought out ideas. I really like your one about warm houses and having enough food. What would you change mostly and what is your favourite thing about your task and next time can you write more in your task description?
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work Le'shar
Kind Regards
Yolanda