Hi my Name is Le'shar and I go to Pt England School I live in New Zealand Glen Innes. I have 2 best friends, their names are Phoenix and Julia. Both of them are 12 years old. We have been best friends for 2 years. My culture is Maori and
I am 12 years old. I love to play games with my friends and my family sometimes I love to go out
with my nana too.
today we done some myth and i have lernt and it's was a ture sotry of a girl who diead with she was about the dragon in lake.but he did'nt want any people to steal her from her
Hi Le'shar,This is a nice post but along with what the others say you should really correct your words and check it before publishing even correcting your pronunciation would be more better as well.Good job!
Hello Le'Shar
ReplyDeleteI Really like your words about this story. The only problem i had was your writing because you need to correct your words.
other than that keep up the good work
thank you jordin for commenting on my blog
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Hello Le'shark, I like your blog post but the only thing you need to do is fix your words but it is still nice please fix your words.
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU,
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Hi Le'shar,This is a nice post but along with what the others say you should really correct your words and check it before publishing even correcting your pronunciation would be more better as well.Good job!
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